Maybe I spoke too soon?

Okay, I know I said I was done writing in my last post, but I have decided to add a little more detail on the geography, history, technology, and what life is like in Norukar. Just a few more sections, not too many pages. Plus, I think I'm going to re-design the map of Norukar. I want Norukar to be built in the hollow remnants of an ancient domed city, so I want the "islands" to be more circular with ridge-walls circling the perimeter. 

Here. Have a quickie illustration to tide you over while you are waiting for me to finish.